Monday, May 23, 2005

Sunday, May 22, 2005

re Commentville: texture is more interesting than statement. I wonder why poets resort to statementalism so much. the Poetics list died on the declamatory wings of statementalists.
I make nothing whatever of these questions that Fulcrum posed to Ron Silliman. first of all, they're loaded, or at least expectant. hopeful of creating a buzz. I guess they have, and well enough: Fulcrum's a good pub. for myself, tho, what joy I get from poetry doesn't derive from the logic that these questions spring from. does yours? I guess we can agree to disagree, just don't bore me. I think (god knows I can't be sure) that I was drawn to poetry specifically because it wasn't of such logical basis as these questions plangently purport. these questions belong in the explain-jokes category. William Blake would make a perfect hash (kick ass!!!) of these questions, and well he should. building a corral around a leaping antelope, or some such figure to suggest the bland attempts to restrict the excilient. and by the way, the commentary to Ron's post is pestilential: wow to the max how bad.

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I'm not sure Ron Silliman's step to eliminate some of the crapoo from his comments boxes will get the job done. I don't blame him for the low rent commentary that associates itself with his posts. his thoughtfulness (even when he's 'out of it') deserves better. the caustic anonymous comments are loserville, of course, and the smarmy compliments bite the big one. the ones that don't relate to the post in question are annoying. attempts at cleverness are best done on your own patch, maybe? ripostes and repartee represent diminishing return, which the writers of same never realize. folks, please have some sense of the medium in which you are working! alas and alack. Ron's comments field is a faked up community. a network, at best, with too many associated gropers. Ron's a lodestone causing chemical changes in the environment, so that people react in curious fashion. that Ron has maintained a non-low profile despite bearing a big red L on his chest says something positive about him. I can almost understand the attitude Bruce Andrews seems to have, tho maybe he's just an a-hole. Perloff, I surmise, suffers from Head of the Dept. syndrome, but that's just a guess. not to characterize overly but what the heck. Silliman's posts are so definitive that they invite comment, but the weakness of the comments box medium, and the kind of knuckleheads attracted to it, syphons a lot of potential from dialogue. Ron doesn't need the comments box like the commenters largely do.

Saturday, May 21, 2005

just saw a production of Much Ado About Nothing, performed by the homeschool cooperative to which Erin belongs. he wasn't in it. they did Winter Tale last year, a decent production but a comparatively dull play. Much Ado is a better play. the leads were all excellent, not only having their lines but reading them with flair. they were all teenagers. the intermix of young kids with older is interesting. and more girls than boys so girls take lot of the male roles. I was most impressed with the boy who played Leonato. he's 8 years old and has trouble focusing. the play must have been good for him, for he really got into the role. he put lots of energy into his lines, even an accent. it was neat to see him perform with such confidence, because he has appeared at times such a worried youngster. I can just see him at home declaiming his lines.
Nada Gordon gets cut by Perloff, Gary Sullivan receives a Bruce Andrews slight. pretty tacky business. I was introduced to Bruce Andrews a few years ago and he gave me some attitude as well. the old gunslinger. I surely did not approach him that way. I don't know what to make of these modest contretemps. I suppose Perloff's academic position necessitates a regal bearing, maybe, and that the Diomedes of the LANGUAGE poets is surly makes some sense. but still. I met Ashbery years ago and he was gracious, much more so than I expected from his poetry.
one more installment to Ex Poetical. fwiw.

Thursday, May 19, 2005

it's fun going thru my books, see the panoply. Ohio must be a hotbed what with Tom Beckett (The Difficulties, Interventions), John Byrum (Generator Press) and John Bennett (Lost and Found Time) all having produced quite a stream of mags, aside from their own work. kudos to the late Leland Hickman for the exceptional production values of the 10 issues of Temblor. I'm guessing I'll have 800 titles listen by the time I'm done

Wednesday, May 18, 2005

more added to Ex_Poetical Libraire list. find a reason to be excited!!!
I dunno why I am listing my poetry books at Ex Poetical. I have a practical reason to have such a list: I keep misplacing books. George Butterick managed to create a list of Olson's reading, which is informative and interesting. I've seen the which of other writers. I dont think my list is so revelatory that way, especially as it is incomplete. books I was given, books bought sight unseen, etc, the list is not so dull as to reveal my taste exactly. up till mid-late 90s I bought and supported pretty well. but money ran low and I slid into other book directions so that I barely bought po books. I'm much more selective now. I still have a ton yet to list
just looked out the window to see a coyote skip thru. pretty sure it is not fox. coyotes, I believe, are more doggish than foxes, which are more cattish. long ago I was running thru the woods when I jammed my ankle. common occurence, but I yelped and fussed. then I looked up to see a fox. it just looked at me curiously for a moment, checking me out, then it started to slink away. I whistled at it, and it turned to look at me again. our little moment. the coyote looked kinda yellowish but, as I said, not foxlike. our cat's sibling is out there somewhere. several years ago we heard caterwauling. I looked out the window and saw a cat yowling at me. Beth at the door called me. there we saw both the cat and a kitten. the kitten immediately ran towards us and the cat ran away. here's your new cat. barely a handful in size. took him a while to accept us, he spent the night under the steps for a couple weeks, but happily ate whatever food we offered. eventually he adopted us. and has zero interest in going out which, in light of owls, coyote, hawks and rabbits with great nasty teeth, was our plan. a brother who looks like him roams hereabouts. whether or not he has permanent sleeping arrangements, he at least looks like he's eating well.
I was reading from Locale by Jessica Grim last night. I meant no disrespect to her when I snided about Ron Silliman's blurb. Gary Sullivan's point about blurbs, that they will be read by those who will read them, essentially, as in: they mean to meet a circuscribed audience: I think it is an apt point. Jessica Grim's work represents just one 21th century. you think of the 20th century and might posit Stein, Pound, Zukofsky, Olson, Ginsberg perhaps as definitive threads in the century's letters. which list betrays anglocentrism but that aside, it's something of a parlour game, one that seems unneeded. Grim's writing, then, reveals (slowly) a hermetic flakiness. her work is doggeddly to the point yet doesn't flourish in a way that is obvious. her effects are not like Niedecker or Zukofsky but she shows a similiar careful restraint in production. her poems have a chipped away sense to them, not expansive. I would locate her as somewhat affected by Williams. perhaps it is me, for sometimes I can be dense, but her lines don't always seem musically strong. she likes the possibility of enjambment, but her endlines also often offer a full stop feel (she uses little punctuation, almost randomly). the score is confusing, but as I said, maybe I'm dense. she might be, like Michael Gizzi, a poet whose work comes better to light once one has heard it read aloud. this book is absoltively all I've read by her. it made me think of Jeff Harrison's work, tho his is located in a weird pre-post 18th century literary landscape that adds an exotic sheen to his procedures. there's a lot of muscle in both writers' work.
Jim Leftwich, Thomas Lowe Taylor et al. Ohio State University keeps the archives of many of these writers and artists. Leftwich's alone could require a separate building to house the output.

Tuesday, May 17, 2005

added another box worth of titles to my poem book list.

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I almost wrote to Gary Sullivan (he invites it (not missives from me specifically) in the post I mention below), then realized that I got nothing weighty to say. still, I note the insularity of po world, which is just dumb ass. it's no rule that I know of, and I never signed the contract. Olson absorbed from a lot of disciplines, not just the poemic community. and furthermore he's writing letters to the newspapers urging locals to notice their local and its touch to the rest of the world. he wasn't exemplar of academic code world, however dense one might find his writings. you could list further examples (Allen Ginsberg and (then) Leroi Jones on the MERV GRIFFIN SHOW!!!). I'm a fine one to talk, with my dedication to introversion. but I haven't bit on the code hook. I write seriously about writing here, and am intentionally slangy and flippant in the process. that's the best I can do to offset the coding. I'm fighting my own insularity by doing this blog, rushing things into online exhibition, and such acts of 'publishing'. I never went thru the kind of education that Laura Carter often winces about which, for all its respectable rigours, often sounds like a mere restriction of the interesting part of the poet. blog space kinda invites an I'm okay/you're okay/they're outside the ball sensibility, for all the word community gets slung about. the boundaries set at least are leaky, which fact is worth celebrating. going back to my initial comments on Gary's comic, I liked the blurring of boundaries that I inferred in its pages. and the comic sellers I guess aren't too fussy on the boundaries either. I remember quite a while ago getting nervous about SPD's categories, as if they were thinking: we'll sell these books to gays, these to Asians, these to women. as if splintering the market would somehow increase sales. I think Ron Silliman's School of Q buggy just foments more of the mentality of restriction. he scourges the Qs for being coded, but his is a coded response. I mean: Jessica Grim begins the 21st century.

Monday, May 16, 2005

a great post by Gary Sullivan re SELLING POETRY BOOKS is here. very lucid. let's us all kindly posit possibilities other than books lanquishing or paying SPD's exorbitant fees or waiting for some college course to choose your book. he says he sold 100 copies of his comic Elsewhere over the weekend, as a commodity, not some poetic medicine. that is, he sold to people who saw the comic as economically viable rather than whatever fizzy water the blurbs might suggest. I mean those snotty noisome intellectual blurbs that make the book in question sound implausible rather than worth buying. like, why would Ron Silliman say Jessica Grim's book begins the 21st century??? I wish I had more eloquence at the moment, for this issue really bubbles.
I'm packing up my books in case the revenuers come calling. in that process I decided to make a list of the books. see how long that continues. I've done 2 boxes worth, and have placed the list on a blog. for what it is worth. the current list represents 1/4 to 1/3 of the poetry books we (Beth and I) have. probably pointless to list them with so many still to be added, but I wanted to see what it looked like. the unusual heft of the Peter Ganick group owes to his having given most of them to us. some of his titles were privately published. I know there are more titles of his still to list. Peter's work has been very useful and inspiring for me. you will note many titles by Henry Gould, again courtesy of the man, and I'm happy to have them. I used to by poetry books freely, supportively, but now the money story rules. sorry.

Sunday, May 15, 2005

I have enjoyed this Sapphic respite. funny how useful and powerful the use of this half a bracket (]) is. why is that? it represents closure, yet it doesn't close off. I feel so fizzy and unfocused lately, I envy short lines and care, such as one sees in Stephen's work. there's a mature acceptance in Stephen's work that is lovely and comforting.

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well, this child is working towards being a digital camera bore. come join me!!! just started twiddling with the pix. it's fun, tweaking all the tweakable parametres. I'm not into photography, tho the pictures of NY that Berenice Abbott took in the 30s really make me jump. her pictures are great because she's oh my god adventurous and sees so much loveliness in the city. think of Ansel Adams, too, in whose work you see the exquisite effort of each image. then a schmo like me who just points and clicks, and 'developing' consists of a little more point and click. yet it's all just method and procedure. I guess it makes me nervous, how these techno advances shorten the distance between concept and realization. ways to access that moving idea. yet hey: I think Jukka must write distance shortening computer routines. does that make sense? when I take a picture, I hope it comes out interestingly. I sure as hell can't tell from the thumbnail image after I click. I have, however, a sense of procedure, not unlike what drives my writing. the terms of digital photography simply are different. take 27 thousand pictures, fuss with them till they work.

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Saturday, May 14, 2005

I was surprised by Ron Silliman's snipe at Alan Sondheim in the 1st note to this post. I can answer for Alan why he (Alan) uses listservs to post his work rather than blogs. it is the interaction of his (Alan's) work with other works, other threads. Ron's being perverse if he doesn't get that. it's not just about plugging his work that Alan resorts to listservs. a blog is a different animal. Ron's showing entrenched thinking on this point. which is no assertion that Ron Silliman is a dinosaur--he aint, don't be a dummyhead--only that here is his blindspot, as we all have same. earlier this week, I forced myself to write if not about my father, at least within the emotions of grief, loss, anger etc that surround the concept that is now my father. I mean, I was in tears recently thinking I hadn't properly mourned him. and what I did was post each of those to Wryting-l, as soon as I'd finished. I only posted a couple to this blog, they are different acts, quite, to post to a blog and to a listserv. I think I'm boring my imaginary reader, but am on something important to me. Ron's being thick to delegate Alan (look at these friendly 1st names!!!) to the realm of self-exploiter. that's just way too simple. I didn't post those pieces simply for look at me purposes. there was something electric to which I was attentive. I can remember Kevin Magee regularly filing his tough, political depth bombs to Poetics to much to little notice. as if there were some asserted politeness to honour. bleah. the space in which we present isn't just playtime. why would Ron ignore the possibility of serious intent on Alan's part? that's dumb. you can quote me.
below is how I tested out on an online personality test that I found via Nada Gordon's blog. much reworked. I think the original reading suggested that I might want to climb the Texas Tower with a few rifles. you know, just another quiet introvert who wants to come out of his shell. I don't remember my procedure exactly with the text, just tried to trick something out of the unbearable definitiveness of the test result. I said below that the Kervinen/Young pas-de-deux gave me to think on how to translate Jukka's method to my own work. hell, I don't know how to do that! I can say that thru the years I have muddled along with certain attempts to reenvision method. I have no programming skills and tho I could learn I don't see myself going that way. but I do have a sense of the mechanism involved in subverting the egotistical sublime, and the value of that. I put these experiments up for what it's worth. I'm not an experimentalist in the excellent sense, but I like to jiggle the framous a bit.

personality

it appreciated starved artist! it appreciated more in reason, and is guided by the present heart and appreciated emotions also very introvert and noble. Naturally, it needs not mean that mussiness has no Intangible. Actually, it appreciated astonishingly emblazoned for certain, so much sentimental and noble. The needs appreciated better reprogrammers to starve a lot. artists appreciated endoscopes and enough certain for present only, as any completed artist is, however impractical present opinions, and sentimental and excessive. The Mussiness finds probably math, logic, and similar mental unpleasant. they present the artistic sensitivities. mussiness prefers immense artistry because then mussiness knows that mussiness cannot ever genuinely have the erroneous answer. So much really the mussiness does not have a reason for being emblazoned. profuse mussiness, because value of dexterities (emotion, spirit, art, kelp,), present only in precious spokeswomen's level. that means the present needs of arrogance clearly . the present personality needs defective emblazoning, introverted, endoscopic, noble, and in detail absurd. It possesses most of the traits it should: it starves the useless artist. Thus you reach outside there, it writes certain short histories that are allegories for the spirit, and it starves!

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Friday, May 13, 2005

here's something the wayback machine kicked out. I bravely took a glimpse into my archives, even the typewriter stuff, and found this one. written in 1972, before I hit 20. one of those poems that arrive like a vision, even with a voice in my head. I eventually elided some of the repetitions, but I'm happy now to put them back in. I won't make any more excuses znd in fact must say this poem isn't indicative of the work I did then. world's slowest learner here.

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Faust


faust come back it is not the winter and
how you look then com back and see the things we
have seen crawling in may they are brighter and craving

shadows last night were strong and followed alongingly with
the wave of the trees and
the steps that we walked... faust
come back in another year and will see... faust
with magic will appear, appear and
appear and looking and looking and appear
lately he comes riding in our shadows in my shadows and the
calm of a morning he rider of the purple sage and
beckons like wheatfields blowing he
gestures in himself looking out faust
you can melt and fold as the climate changes freeze
if the breeze is strong and bitter and
relax i think just as well faust come
back and thrill me and a lady will appear and smile and
whelp in the night and wallow in the night and slide and
trick and the thing left behind, things you left behind did
you take them in account did they
smile later that night is this a
bitter plan? faust in your blessing we can return
and return and faust who
is the fool faust you blessed pig you squirming vulture ran
into a surprising wall faust the last dance was for you you
missed it faust

fuckin pine trees swaying in the way i
intend to say this and this and this, and forge your
mean forgetfulness and listen to the river piss is
brains thru the countryside but but THIS is what will
be said, faust come back come back it is not winter and
how you look then come back and see the things we have
seen crying and chuckling we have have seen in may
when the trees are lighter in blossoms and the rains dont
bear down like the falling of the leaves and things are
brighter and craving now and burning by our deeds come
back faust come back into the night where another day beckons

Thursday, May 12, 2005

today

a bright fury of spring tuned high. cloudless, or near enough. yesterday was warm enough that I undid all the screens to let the spring air in. today was bejesus windy, even as the sun was warm. I took springtime pix of flowers and green. I like holding the camera oddly. just wish I could maintain focus. I bicycled to Great Meadows. I took the path in, which is a former railroad cut. muddy as of april, not may. the ground is plump with water, the Concord River is a mile wide, into the woods. I photographed a bit in that toothy wind. swallows were veering as they do, but they didn't look like they had conrol in the wind. seemed to slide across the sky, willy nilly. spent some hours at the home school cooperative. hung with Isaac, whom I've menched. he then had a class and I was given Anna to keep an eye on. Anna's 5 I guess, was, with her older sister Alice, in our art class. I just had to be the responsible adult while her mother was away, but Anna went out alone to the parking lot to use chalk on the asphalt so I joined her. 2 other children joined us. then indoors and I did some scribbling in my sketchbook and Anna did a drawing in pencil on some paper I gave her. Isaac returned and began drawing a pair of legs. last week he did a picture of Charles I (avec tête), which he gave me. the legs here were very good, but he hadn't the time to finish the figure. I read Whitman, scribbled more, and read about a symposium, Dalai Lama and scientists (great stuff!). participated in a class to make a coptic stitch book. which is sewing several signatures together. I got the concept but didn't perform well. couldn't keep the stitch tight. thus and so forth, till tired now and will read to sleep.

My Saltarello

In the year of my saltarello I rose from something sandy, wild wind means, and looked around. And the sentence wanted you along as well. We were brought to the uses of colour while imagining how heavy each wave on the shoreline might become, death to anything. I found in my saltarello a further instant match, a struck sulfur beauty that could increase as the sentence wore its wealth. Wind is strong these days. We imagine the globe as a systemic function. I would have slept late but the sun found its way across the map once more. There was nothing that I could do. I love the sound of saltarello on the tip of morning, in the excelling buds, in the dampened possible means, in the sideways grass. The wind is fury from the wealth of long ago. Its sentence fulfills a brink. We face the wind. We make the electric talk of profit and loss. Some remain with us, all along. Some images are scratched with charcoal onto undone paper. We groom the whole narrative from one to two, all the points that we can imagine. The saltarello persists in tribute, slaying demons by mere exalt. The energy again, and again, even past weeping. I want to hold your hand again, a matter of trial and trail. Our ship intends a consummate port of days ahead, fetched to saltarello wind and sun.

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Mark Young's interview with Jukka-Pekka Kervinen deserves notice, which many, I am happy to say, have already provided. it reminds me of the interviews that Tom Beckett himself has done, in that the intelligence of the questions equals the intelligence of the answers. which is no doubt poorly said. Jukka is the subject but Mark's apt quesions bring an qual intelligence, thus dialogue. Tom's interview with Ron Silliman in The Difficulties in the 80s was a real portal for me into LANGUAGE poetry. Mark provides instigation for furtherance on Jukka's part. all the interviews on this blog have been excellent, but my understanding of programming is still so weak that the interview with Jukka proves more a necessity to me than the others. I'm even seeing ways to translate Jukka's sense of programming into my means. thanks to Tom Beckett, the founder of this feast.

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Wednesday, May 11, 2005

Skullbolt really is the genuine. it's not just intellectual talk but some frying on the nerve. it is an honourable self-reflection, without the kind of style cosnciousness that you might find, uh, here, and many elsewhere. this blog always surprises me, which itself surprises me.
I can't well say why I like this but it has attitude that I know.

Tuesday, May 10, 2005

lines written

Lines written at a small
distance from my House, and sent
by my little Boy
to the Person to whom they are addressed:


Simon Lee: the old Huntsman, who

lost his father, miracle of description.

Pinch of forming
exact words out of
piecing together. Then
restless in matching
granite with
other forms of
regret. Often scented with
trees from beginning.
Sunset on down. A
quiet parsing meanwhile, and
establish the loss
in effect. I
made you live.
Dad inside gulf.
I made something when attic
dust settled and you knew.
Literal toward beginning and
into fuller gainsay, leaving
nothing and almost
nothing. A first
paragraph perhaps.

process agreement

Coffee will last and we'll stay together. We'll stay in to fade with the condition. Growing light perks for steel trial, often when you merely sigh. The afterburn of tulip harms not a single note along. We've words to say and weave the words away. Too bad and all the dynamite in the world will track the presence. Yours is a smile while mine seems weighted toward the black and white of grey photos down the line. Awesome maybe tells a few good jokes until we find our place. Restless instance inside the bridging moment of condition. We've taken sentences for our own, as usual. Even the type of sentence is clear, in this light. Saying no more is saying plenty. Coffee will last another place and time. Stay tuned is all that's left.

Monday, May 09, 2005


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a tiny bit of John M Bennett's work. this is what the Wryting-l list does.
where've I been? a blog featuring mostly visual from Thomas Lowe Taylor, D Ross Priddle and including the phenomenal Jim Leftwich. go here. these are some people who are fiddling with the edges.
time to admit that I am depressed. I'm not gloomy or joyless but definitely anxious and sad. years of caregiving made a weight not easy to slough off. caring for children, you see them gain knowledge and ability. caring for an older person, you see them slip. when we realized that no more could be done, that his care was beyond us, and he was returned to the rehab, I was the one putting him into the ambulance. I was witness to a logn time of loss as his physical and mental capabilities changed and declined. I don't know if I mentioned, but the day he died, I played a tune by this lamented Canadian group Rare Air called "Marvin's March". a stirring slow Scottish march dedicated to the memory of (of all people) Marvin Gaye. it begins traditional sounding, with 2 bagpipes and those tight Highland snares. ensuing choruses weird out a bit with funky electric bass, drums and odd key changes. very basic voice instead of crap memorial services and obits that miss the point. it's not like the world isn't beautiful. Erin turned 16 on the 4th. friday we ate out not exactly for Erin's birthday but why not. yesterday the three of us went furniture shopping, i.e. Beth's joy, my duty and Erin's complete torture. it was great. I'm lucky. just not over my grief.
Henry Gould is back and, it appears, still motivated, so I'll let him back onto my blog list. HG Poetics.

Sunday, May 08, 2005


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an Alli Warren reading that, according to Stephanie Young and (link from her blog) Kasey Mohammad, must've been a wowzer. I'm not well read in Warren's work but remain ready to accept the verdicts of Young and Mohammad (not that I doubt their perpicacity) even so. I'm more or less ready to get into fistfights about Joanne Kyger, tho I've read a measly amount of her work. same thing with Wieners before finally I caught up with a goodly portion of his work. there are simply some whose work just gives you righteous clues from the littlest evidence. I didn't just like "Maddy Groves" the 1st time I heard Fairpoirt Convention's version, I wanted to follow Richard Thompson and drummer Dave Mattacks around. which 30+ years later I essentially have done. so anyway, I appreciate Stephanie's (excuse 1st name basis, it just sounds better) adjustment of Kasey's depiction. it's an apt distinction between Alli steering herself or the roomful. the one is an integration of the reader and the word, and that performance with the audience. the other is a manipulation. perhaps the most electrifying reading I ever attended was Clark Coolidge way way back. I think he read mainly from The Maintains, at any rate, he read a lot of prefixes and suffixes. we'd studied the book beforehand, not to say I grokked more than an inkling of what the fuck. what got me was the confidence of Coolidge (or should I say Clark, to MAINTAIN consistency) in reading this curious stuff. I mean I was 19 and still the poetic nympholept trying to keep up with an entirely new substantiation of poetry. I dunno if I learned prior or after that Clark was a jazz drummer (that explains it!!!), but it sure helped. and it is that sense that I glean from S and K concerning A's reading. I have acres and pains concerning the performance of poetry. for it aint, for me, a rock thing. in my minuscule reading experience, me as reader that is, I sense myself as conduit. the words going thru me, and with them, an emotion that isn't really mine. I saw Noah Eli Gordon read last summer, and was impressed. it was virtuoso reading, very strong and pushed. but as it went along I started to think there was more effort and push than, um, content. the words didn't stay with me, but the muscular performance did. I'll bet there was more to Alli's reading than swagger. I know there's poetry in them words, so I wish more of that more was adverted by the critical element. that's why I ragged on Kasey earlier. he was there, he's brilliant, he could've said more. as I said before, he sounded smarmy.
Jack Kimball doesn't seem to care for faked out little-ivy poetry. years ago Eliot Weinberger slaughtered some poet, maybe Frederick Seidman but don't quote me, in Sulphur, for something akin to this that Jack points to. EW also slaughtered Carolyn Forche, also in Sulphur, for not quite the same score. all in a day's work.

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